Love Song
2018-02-26 @ 01:33pmtags: antivalentine jazz piano girl-with-piano
Oh hey, no chorus! Finally hit one of the extra challenges this FAWM. Woot woot!
Lyrics
You probably thoughtThis would be a love song
I know you thought
That I still care
I cared about you
When you were a child
It's a long time
Since then
You probably thought
This would be a love song
Although you
Treated me wrong
I loved you once
But the man you became
Is a stranger
To his own soul
You probably thought
This would be a love song
Oh no
And adulations of a crowd
Can never fill
That emptiness inside
Your heart
Only you
Can love yourself
I know you don't
I know you don't
Comments
- Martin Quibell - 2018-02-26 @ 03:16pm
Great writing Chagall :-) I love the fact that each verse starts the same, which reflects a feeling of having to repeat the same thing all of the time, when you’re constantly reminding people of something. Beautifully flowing!
- mojosarmy - 2018-02-26 @ 08:17pm
Love it. I agree, that is one of my favorite motifs, and you use it well here.
- Lady C - 2018-02-27 @ 07:00am
Love how this has no chorus! The flow is great and words are so on point! Just fab! 💙
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