My Rebellion
2018-02-02 @ 07:43amtags: synth unvalentines
Totally new lyrics this year, more pop structure. But it's a Goth band soooo not pop. I think.
Lyrics
I chose to dieAt nineteen
When I turned down
The devil's machine
Yes ever since then
Each moment of breath again
Is victory
Yes victory
In my rebellion oh oh
In my rebellion oh oh
I pulled the short stick
It's my fate
Yet I'll carefully carve it
Into a pointed stake
To pierce the heart
Vampire dust for my art
Is victory
Yes victory
In my rebellion oh oh
In my rebellion oh oh
Those lips which kissed me
Filled with only lies
The truth illuminates
Seeing through disguise
Is victory
Yes victory
In my rebellion oh oh
In my rebellion oh oh
Comments
- Marije - 2018-02-03 @ 01:49pm
Solid lyric, I think the structure works well. I really like the stick/stake metaphor!
- Lady C - 2018-02-06 @ 05:23pm
This is very well put together, the atory arch is totally sound, it does not sound scattered. It has great direction and flow. I love the metaphors you chose as well.
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